Jacques Viljoen
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Unedited Draft -Excerpt: Chapter 21 -

1/9/2018

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Surge of the Seismic Wave

Chapter 21:  3644 words (unedited)
A few teaser paragraphs - 512 words
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​“Is it really necessary that you confess and put the cards on Nicole’s table today love?  The first time she meets me and you want to let the cat out of the bag, full on, to make plain? Don’t you think it’s more appropriate for her to get to know me as a friend of your’s before you dump your life’s latitude on her and the twins, and the two of us, might subconsciously have to participate in the surge of the seismic wave?”

“No babes.  I don’t want to live a undercover, secluded, cloak-and-dagger life when it comes to the twins.  I owe it to everyone close to me, including my family to know what course my life has taken.  I never, in my wildest dreams thought that the Divine will send a man after the million affirmations “Everlasting true love arrive on my doorstep”.  Never in a million years I thought I need to be more specific, asking for a woman crossed my mind. But I’m glad I didin’t. I always knew that you need to be specific but it never crossed my mind that my lifetime partner might be a same sex partner.  I never thought that it might be part of my blueprint”.

Andrew didn’t know that he can have such a connection with another man. He said he’s not ready for another relationship but if the Divine send him the right person you don’t choose, stuff just happen.  He thought he might meet another lady who will stay his girlfriend and they might live a life between 2 houses and sleepovers can be arranged.  He couldn’t put his heart on the line and go through contingency and risk that it might be doomed with complexity and intricacy as results. Before our journeys start to move in parallel, a second marriage was no option but he made it clear that he has hope and its part of his prayers that I’ll say yes if he ask my hand for life.

2100 words later
“I’m all distracted and agitated about your x-wife’s bat of an eye, sixty second husband my love”
“Don’t let him get to you babes” while Andrew stand behind Drake, give him a kiss on the back of his neck while giving him a deep shoulder massage while he sits on the couch busy writing a blog. “Life is too short to stress yourself with arseholes who don’t even deserve to be an issue in your life, and that goes for Nichole too; making ludicrous and nonsensical evaluations and substitute her solitary emotional controversy her reality. I have to sit back and see how the twins observe and absorb this kind of behavior. If her moral conduct don’t take a turn to a confident clear-cut I’ll be forced to intervene and negotiate a deal where the twins have an example of stability, here in our setting where there’s tranquility but yet the necessary discipline”

"And beside all the negative things... Look at your sexy feet babes.  Promise me that you'll climb into bed with me with that sexy pair of feet of yours?"

I tilt my head right back and give him a big seductive smile.

"They are all yours tonight my love.  Do with them whatever you want to.  I'll lay back and let go of control.  Not only my feet, My whole body if you'd like"

Another 1000-odd words to follow

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    Jacques Viljoen and his fiance's life changed radically after a sea accident left him paralyzed and with  a brain injury from which he miraculously recovered after waking from a coma. Being paralyzed left Jacques with no choice as to adapt to life bound to a wheelchair after an active life. 

    We hope and motivate Jacques to write a Biography about his life, before and after the accident, which will be an extremely motivational script after I came across his blogs and a few chapters of his current masterpiece, the Shades of Gay Trilogy, with fertile words and style that grab your attention from the first paragraph. I've worked and reviewed over a 1000 authors work and very few has the capacity to claim your full attention that you don't want to let go.  

    Shades of Gay will be the first Trilogy Jacques will be writing and I'm glad he chose a well known Publisher in New York to publish his Trilogy.  

    I truly believe that Shades of Gay will be a Hollywood Hit after producers get hold of Part I. 

    All the best Jacques, and update me (chapter by chapter will be good).  Cant wait to have a signed paperback copy in my hand.

    Justin Hurley

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