Chapter 19: 2433 words (unedited) A few teaser paragraphs to sketch the scene
Jeez, this is a nice hotel. They recognize his vehicle and nearly opened the driver’s door for a valet service. I wind down the window and the attendant saw Andrew laying on the passenger seat and gave a smile when he heard a few snores.
I whisper to the attendant: “We are here to pick up some clothes” Ever polite the attendant whispered back “Follow me Sir. I’ll show you where to park, close to the elevator” and I reply only by moving my lips because I heard his breathing patterns changed and I knew he’s waking up, Thank You!
I love surprises. I want him to wake up next to the elevator and a How did you manage to find the place so quick and easy babes!
I misjudged his sleeping-persona! A bomb wont wake him. I had to shake him a few times and give him a few cheeck-kisses before he shown reaction.
“Wow babes. We are here. And I see Thomas must’ve shown you the way in?”
Oh my word, a thousand thoughts are rushing through my mind. Is this a regular thing? Maybe I’m not the first man he fancied? “Yes my love. Thomas said this is where he let all the men park that come to visit you”. I’m waiting for a reaction.
1500 words later
“It looks like the perfect designer house in a magazine love. I’m amazed. The view throughout the whole penthouse is immaculate.”
“Let me introduce you to the main suite. You’ll experience the energy is extremely dense in this space. This is where all my ideas and techniques originate and this is where I had my first fantasy, hoping that you’ll agree on a first date and waking up to the most beautiful man walking earth. I’ve never had any sexual fantasy that involved a man, but you made it happen. I can’t get rid of the idea of looking into your eyes with you sitting on top of my naked body. Beside all of the hardcore thoughts, I bet you’ll really enjoy the view.” When we walked through the door of the main suite I saw, for the first time in my life, perfection in a space where you spend the most important part of your day, your bed.
You walk into a thick glass wall with a 45 degree angle with waterfall running from the top of the whole 4 or 5 meters glass, creating a water curtain through which you can see the 180 degrees view of city. You hardly hear the water. As you walk around the glass wall you walk into a fresh open space of bedroom with a small lounge in the corner. The water curtain serve as a headboard for the super king size bed. Instinctively I want to jump on the bed but I had to walk closer to the seamless doors. As I walked closer to it it automatically opened onto a huge patio. I walked up to the edge and looked back onto the main suite. I’m stunned.
I left Andrew behind because I’m so excited to experience this space. I’m like a child who saw a playpen after being locked indoors for years. Andrew walked to up to me, standing with his legs spread apart touching the side of my legs and fold his arms around me. He gave me a quick kiss, and pulled back his head and looked me in the eye. “I’m in love with you Mr Henderson”. I release his body that I clasped around his hips and put my arms on his shoulders while holding his head in my one hand.
Jacques Viljoen and his fiance's life changed radically after a sea accident left him paralyzed and with a brain injury from which he miraculously recovered after waking from a coma. Being paralyzed left Jacques with no choice as to adapt to life bound to a wheelchair after an active life.
We hope and motivate Jacques to write a Biography about his life, before and after the accident, which will be an extremely motivational script after I came across his blogs and a few chapters of his current masterpiece, the Shades of Gay Trilogy, with fertile words and style that grab your attention from the first paragraph. I've worked and reviewed over a 1000 authors work and very few has the capacity to claim your full attention that you don't want to let go.
Shades of Gay will be the first Trilogy Jacques will be writing and I'm glad he chose a well known Publisher in New York to publish his Trilogy.
I truly believe that Shades of Gay will be a Hollywood Hit after producers get hold of Part I.
All the best Jacques, and update me (chapter by chapter will be good). Cant wait to have a signed paperback copy in my hand.